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The table shows the consumer durable owned in Britain

The table shows the consumer durable owned in Britain OyMpE
The table beneath illustrtaes the hard goods invested in the UK from 1972 to 1983 which are Central heating, television, video, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine, dishwasher, and telephone Overall, it can be observed that television by Far had the maximum percentage in every span, whereas the least owned households was video and dishwasher. In terms of the TV and home cleaner both had the highest figure roughly 93% and 87% in 1972 respectively, However refrigerator and Washing Machine followed the same pattern and they both were around 66 to 70% in 1972, and after increasing every year had figure nearly 80 to 90% in the final year On the other hand, video was invented in 1983 in the houses of English people and, its ratio was 18%, dishwasher as well published in 1978 round about 3% and just rised 5% in last year lastly, central heating, and telephone surged every breadth, In 1972 Central heating owned in Britain by 37% which went 64% in 1983, same as telephone, in the beginning it was 42 % and after incrementing every span got 77% in 1983.
The table beneath
illustrtaes
the
hard
goods
invested in the UK from 1972 to 1983 which are Central heating, television, video, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine, dishwasher, and telephone

Overall
, it can
be observed
that television by Far had the maximum percentage in every span, whereas the least
owned
households was video and dishwasher.

In terms of the TV and home cleaner both had the highest figure roughly 93% and 87% in 1972
respectively
,
However
refrigerator and Washing Machine followed the same
pattern and
they both were around 66 to 70% in 1972, and after increasing every year had figure
nearly
80 to 90% in the final year

On the other hand
, video
was invented
in 1983 in the
houses
of English
people
and, its ratio was 18%, dishwasher
as well
published in 1978 round about 3% and
just
rised
5% in last year

lastly
, central heating, and telephone surged every breadth, In 1972 Central heating
owned
in Britain by 37% which went 64% in 1983, same as telephone, in the beginning it was 42 % and after incrementing every span
got
77% in 1983.
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