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The diagram illustrates the step-by-step production of sugar from sugar cane.

The diagram illustrates the step-by-step production of sugar from sugar cane. 8ar2B

The diagram illustrates the step-by-step production of sugar from sugar cane. Overall, it can be seen that this man-made process involves 7 stages starting with growing sugar cane and finishing with cooling sugar syrup. Looking at the first stage, sugar canes are grown by workers, a process that takes approximately one year or one year and a half. Next, sugar canes are harvested, either by the worker or automatic machine before being crushed in a juicer machine. At this point, workers put sugar juice in a limestone filler which later purifies all of the impurities. Subsequently, sugar juice is put in an evaporator machine in order to be heated at a certain temperature and later become sugar syrup. Following the heating stage, workers put it in a centrifuge, a circular-shaped device separating sugar crystals from sugar syrups. Finally, sugar is dried and cooled in a cylindrical container, which completes the whole sugar manufacturing process.

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