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The diagram illustrates the process the use of manufacturing brick to building industry

The process diagram illustrates the process how to manufacture bricks step by step for construction industry. Overall, it is clear that, process is start with digger the clay form farm and end on delivery to construction site. The process start when crane digger the clay from the farm. After digger, clay send to roller where clay get filtering by mental grid and remove unusual things. In the next step, sand and water are mixing together. Further, mixed clay send to mould, there clay get a shape. There are two methods to shape brick with help of mould or wire cutter. Mean while, brick baked into drying oven for 24-48 hours and after that brick store in cooling chamber on tempature moderate 200 Celsius -980 Celsius to high 870 Celsius -1300 Celsius for 42 to 72 hours. Bricks are ready. Then packaging doing in proper way and deliver to construction side by truck
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diagram illustrates the
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process
how to manufacture
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bricks
step by step for construction industry.

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, it is
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clear
that,
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is
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start
with digger the
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clay
form farm and
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end
on delivery to construction site.

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start
when crane digger the
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clay
from the farm. After digger,
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clay
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send
to roller where
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clay
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get
filtering by mental grid and remove unusual things. In the
next
step, sand and water are mixing together.
Further
,

mixed
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clay
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send
to
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mould
, there
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clay
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get
a shape. There are two methods to shape
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brick
with
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help
of
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mould
or wire cutter.
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Mean while
,
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brick
baked into drying oven for 24-48 hours and after that
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brick
store in cooling chamber on
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tempature
moderate 200 Celsius -980 Celsius to high 870 Celsius -1300 Celsius for 42 to 72 hours.
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Bricks
are ready. Then packaging doing in proper way and deliver to construction
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side
by
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truck
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process the use of manufacturing brick to building industry

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4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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