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The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Le31

The diagram shows the process of how bricks are made for the building industry. Overall, the process consists of seven stages in the production of bricks, starting with digging the clay and culminating in the delivery of bricks. At the first stage, the clay is dug from the ground by a digger before it is placed on a metal grid and it passes through a roller. After that, sand and water are mixed with the clay, and the clay is shaped into bricks by wire cutter or by putting into a mold. At the fourth stage in the process, the clay bricks are placed into the drying oven for two days. Next, they are heated in a kiln at a moderate temperature from 200° C to 980° C and then at a high temperature (870° C - 1300° C). The clay bricks are put into a cooling chamber for 48 - 72 hours. Finally, the bricks are pass through a packaging process until it is ready to deliver.

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