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the table give information about the five small companies in British that came top in survey of staff conducted by national newspaper to find out which companies are the best to work for.

the table give information about the five small companies in British that came top in survey of staff conducted by national newspaper to find out which companies are the best to work for. 327Y

The information in the table is about the survey conducted by the national newspaper about five small companies. Overall, in the survey the fifth company have majority of the features are high in value, where as it lags in the staff in high income bracket. The company 1st is having the lowest values. Coming in the details of survey, The 1st company is having staff number 56, where as in 2nd, 3rd, 4th companies are having nearest values above 70. the highest members are in 5th company of 190. While in the ratio of male and female workers the 4th company is having lowest in male and highest in female workers which is 13: 87. The 3st company is having highest in male count. Most of the companies prefer age of under 33's, it is high in the 5th company. Rarely the age over 55's are taken highest in 3rdcompany with the count of 8%. In staff turnover and the staff in high income bracket the 4th compare acquire the highest position of 48%, although the 5th company gained the different variables but contain the lowest income bracket of 2%.

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