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The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. aK8X
The graph shows information about which indicates buying tea and coffee highlight in five Australian cities. While buying fresh coffee increased in three cities, which called Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart. Their percentages of instant coffee and visiting cafe for coffee or tea was declined. Being considerable their percentages were less than selling of fresh coffee. Where as fresh coffee selling and buying instant coffee almost equally than visiting cafe to drink coffee or tea. We can see that instant coffee was increased in Adelaide, as a consequence showed that instant coffee was soled more than fresh coffee. While Adelaide has that result of instant coffee. Brisbane has conversely activity. Fresh coffee was rised about 5 persantages yet, drinking coffee and tea in cafe was equally. Overall, the percentage of drinking and buying coffee has top of result in Melbourne yet, Hobart too and the considerably result of selling was in Adelaide.
The graph
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shows
information about which indicates
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buying
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tea
and
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coffee
highlight in five Australian cities.

While
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buying
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fresh
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coffee
increased in three cities, which called Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart. Their percentages of instant
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coffee
and visiting
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cafe
for
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coffee
or
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tea
was declined
. Being considerable their percentages were less than selling of
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fresh
coffee.

Did you mean "Whereas"?
Where as
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fresh
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coffee
selling and
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buying
instant
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coffee
almost
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equally
than visiting
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cafe
to drink
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coffee
or
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tea
. We can
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see
that instant
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coffee
was increased
in Adelaide, as a consequence
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showed
that instant
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coffee
was soled
more than
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fresh
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coffee
.
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While
Adelaide has that result of instant
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coffee
. Brisbane has
conversely
activity.
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Fresh
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coffee
was
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rised
about 5
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persantages
yet
, drinking
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coffee
and
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tea
in
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cafe
was
equally
.

Overall
, the percentage of drinking and
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buying
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coffee
has top of result in Melbourne
yet
, Hobart too and the
considerably
result of selling was in Adelaide.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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