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Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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These chart's indicate the percentage of water used for different purpose's in different area's of the world. In reference to the chart's, it could be said that North America and Europe uses 48% and 53% of water respectively for industrial purpose. Followed by Agricultual usage at 39% and 32% respectively. The remaining percentage is consumed for domestic purpose which is 13%% and 15% respectively and also the least of all other puepose's. Similarly Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America use the most percentage of water that is 84%, 88%, 81% and 71% respectively for agricultural purpose. Further, Africa, South America and Central Asia use 9%, 19% and 7% respectively for domestic purpose and lower percentage of 7%, 10% and 5% for industrial use. Whereas, this is not the case with South East Asia where it uses it's least percentage of water for domestic usage that is 7% and 12% of it's total water for indutrial use. Thus overall we can come to the conclusion that approximately 66% of the global water is used for agricultural purpose which is the highest followed by domestic usage of 22. 5% and least used for industrial consumption at approximately 11%.
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IELTS academic Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

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