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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment

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Given is a map that illustrates changes that are expected to happen after redevelopment in a university's sports centre in the future. Overall, the majority of alterations are projected to take place in the west and east side of the building, whereas the center of it will remain so. Looking at the map, it is evident that the building will be modernised significantly including a lot of facilities such as a leisure pool, a changing room. In addition, there will be sports shop and café on the left and right side of the entrance, while the place of the reception will remain as used to be. What is more, it is obvious from the map, sports hall and two dance studios are planned to be constructed instead of outdoor courts. Furthermore, there will not be significant moderations except gym which is expected to expand in the future.
Given
is a map that illustrates
changes
that are
expected
to happen after redevelopment in a university's sports
centre
in the future.
Overall
, the majority of alterations
are projected
to take place in the west and east side of the building, whereas the center of it will remain
so
. Looking at the map, it is evident that the building will be
modernised
significantly
including
a lot of
facilities such as a leisure pool, a changing room.
In addition
, there will be sports shop and café on the
left
and right side of the entrance, while the place of the reception will remain as
used
to be.
What is more
, it is obvious from the map, sports hall and two dance studios
are planned
to
be constructed
instead
of outdoor courts.
Furthermore
, there will not be significant
moderations
except gym which is
expected
to expand in the future.
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IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment

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