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The diagram illustrates the process of online food shopping.

The diagram illustrates the process of online food shopping. RBQY

The diagram demonstrates the stages of purchasing food via the internet. The process consists of eight stages, starting with browsing for the products online and ending with the delivery of the order. First, customers view the items in the website of the supermarket and choose what they intend to buy. It is then that the selected food is added to the shopping basket. Next, the customer fills a form with information details about the delivery. Following this, a payment method must be chosen in order for the purchase to be completed and sent to the warehouse. Once the order has been received by the warehouse, the products are collected from the shelves by a member of the staff or a robot. The food is later passed to be packed in bags. Before their transportation to the customer, a receipt is printed and attached to the bags. After that they are loaded in a lorry. In the final stage, the order is delivered to the customer's address.

The diagram demonstrates the stages of purchasing food via the internet. The process consists of eight stages, starting with browsing for the products online and ending with the delivery of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
. First
, customers view the items The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the website".on the website
in the website
 of the supermarket and choose what they intend to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
. It is then that the selected food is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the shopping basket. Next
, the customer fills a form with information This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about the delivery. Following this, a payment method This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be chosen
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
 for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 to be completed
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to the warehouse. Once the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
 has been received
 by the warehouse, the products are collected
 from the shelves by a member of the staff or a robot. The food is later passed to be packed
 in bags. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
 their transportation to the customer, a receipt is printed
 and attached to the bags. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that they are loaded
 in a lorry. In the final stage, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
is delivered
 to the customer's address. 