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The diagram illustrates the natural process of water passing through air and land and coming back to the ocean, which is known as the water cycle.

The diagram illustrates the natural process of water passing through air and land and coming back to the ocean, which is known as the water cycle. 0a9EQ
The diagram illustrates the natural process of water passing through air and land and coming back to the ocean, which is known as the water cycle. According to the picture, we can see clearly that this natural activity involves three main stages including evaporation, precipitation, and water flowing back into the sea. The hydrologic cycle begins with water vapor formation as a result of trees’ transpiration and ocean evaporation due to heat from the sun. consequently, the steam condenses into clouds. At the second stage, which is labeled as ‘precipitation’ in the picture, water falls as rain or snow. At the third stage, the water caused by snow melting and raining may have various paths to return to the sea. Some of it can fall into lakes or percolate into the ground. Eventually, groundwater from those two sources flows back to its original place and subsequently is ready to start another water cycle again.
The diagram illustrates the natural process of
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passing through air and land and coming back to the ocean, which
is known
as the
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water
cycle.

According to the picture, we can
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that this natural activity involves three main stages including evaporation, precipitation, and
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flowing back into the sea.

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vapor formation
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of trees’ transpiration and ocean evaporation due to heat from the sun.
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consequently
, the steam condenses into clouds. At the second stage, which
is labeled
as ‘precipitation’ in the picture,
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water
falls as rain or snow.

At the third stage, the
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caused by snow melting and raining may have various paths to return to the sea.
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Some
of it can fall into lakes or percolate into the ground.
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, groundwater from those two sources flows back to its original place and
subsequently
is ready to
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start
another
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cycle again.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the natural process of water passing through air and land and coming back to the ocean, which is known as the water cycle.

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