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the diagram illustrates the process by which geothermal enargy is used in the production of energy.

the diagram illustrates the process by which geothermal enargy is used in the production of energy. N3dLW
provided picture manifest how electrocity is generated in Geothermal power plant. In general, The diagram can be separated into surface process and underground process and also involved 5 steps in the process. In the first steps, cold water is pumping down 4. 5 km into the geothermal zone after being the injection well. Next, the water is went through the underground as a hot rocks in order to being the production well. Then, the hot water is pumped up inti the condenser, after that, Steam are evaporated into the turbine which powerd by steam. Before being sent power into the electricity grid, The electricity is pdoduced bt the turbine in the generater.
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picture manifest how
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electrocity
is generated
in Geothermal power plant.
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, The diagram can
be separated
into surface process and underground process and
also
involved 5 steps in the process. In the
first
steps,
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cold
water is pumping down 4. 5 km into the geothermal zone after being the injection well.
Next
, the water is
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went
through the underground as a hot rocks in order to
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being
the production well. Then, the hot water
is pumped
up
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inti
the condenser, after that, Steam
are evaporated
into the turbine which
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powerd
by steam.
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Before
being
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power into the electricity grid, The electricity is
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pdoduced
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the turbine in the
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IELTS academic the diagram illustrates the process by which geothermal enargy is used in the production of energy.

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