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The bar chart illustrates the average class size in primary and lower secondary school in 6 nations compared to the world

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The bar chart illustrates the average class size in primary and lower secondary school in 6 nations compared to the world average in 2006. Overall, the average class size in South Korea ranked first among other nations, whereas Iceland and Denmark had the lowest proportion of students on average in the classroom in 2006. In 2006, South Korea had the largest primary school and lower secondary classes, at around 34 and 40 and students per class, respectively. Japan came second, with 31 students at primary school and 33 students at secondary school on average. In Mexico, the average quantity of students in the classroom was 25 at primary school and 34 at secondary school. On the other hand, figures for Denmark and Iceland were insignificant, which are smaller than the world average primary school classes, at about 23 pupils per class. Another noticeable point is that the number of primary students in the classroom on average in UK is the same as that of Mexico at 25, while figures for secondary students in Uk are slightly less than Mexico, accounted for 35
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the average class size in primary and lower secondary school in 6 nations compared to the world

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