Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The flow diagram describe the process of milk production by various steps from cows grazing to selling of milk product in shop.

The flow diagram describe the process of milk production by various steps from cows grazing to selling of milk product in shop. kLXER

The flow diagram describe the process of milk production by various steps from cows grazing to selling of milk product in shop. Overall, there are around 6 to 7 process occur before milk goes out for sale like storing the milk, delivery of milk, manufacture of other products and packaging. Describing in detail, in the very first step grass provided as a food material for the cows so afterwards we can obtain sufficient milk from them twice a day with the help of milking machine. This milk is further send to the refrigeration tank for storage. Later on it is delivered to dairy daily by modes of transportation. In the upcoming stages, pasteurized milk, cheese, cream, and butter are produced separately. At the final stage, after packaging all the items in bottle or boxes are dispatched to super-market.

The flow diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 the process of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 production by various steps from cows grazing to selling of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 product in shop.

Overall
, there are around 6 to 7 process occur This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 goes out for sale like storing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
, delivery of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
, manufacture of other products and packaging.

Describing in detail, in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
first
 step grass provided as a food material for the cows This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 afterwards we can obtain sufficient You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 from them twice a day with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of milking machine. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 is further
Consider using a past participle here: "sent".sent
send
 to the refrigeration tank for storage. Later on it is delivered
 to dairy daily by modes of transportation. In the upcoming stages, pasteurized You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
, cheese, cream, and butter are produced
separately
. At the final stage, after packaging all the items in bottle or boxes are dispatched
 to super-market. 