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The diagram illustrates the life cycle of the silkworm and the process of silk cloth production .

The diagram illustrates the life cycle of the silkworm and the process of silk cloth production. jL28

The life cycle of silkworm has four major stages which begins with eggs laid by the mother worm. after around 10 days this eggs are then transformed into silkworm larva. they usually eat mulberry leaves for growth. in the third stage they develop into silk thread at the last stage it is transformed into cocoons which is required in the process of silk cloth. Lastly, in the production of silk cloth which involves 5 stages in the first stage cocoons are selected and boiled in hot water. after boiling the thread is unwinded into 300-900m long thread then these are twisted and dyed. finally the silk is weaved Overall, The diagram illustrates the life cycle of the silkworm and the process of silk cloth production.

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