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Park gone under few changes 2010 2015 and 2020

Park gone under few changes 2010 2015 and 2020 KQXN
The map shows the plan of which park in 2010 and 15 and also shows the prediction of 2020 overall, it can be seen at the park. gone under a very changes in 5 years and many more expected in futures. In the year of 2010 park had one found in on the center and eastern and northern west area was fully covered with a trace three menses were seen in southwest corner of the park but in the next five years plants were cut down from the north street side and introduced a picnic sports followed by the cross corner benches were replaced by kids playing area it was surprising to see that the benches were arranged in circular directions around the fountain. Pak expected to more change in future which was hard different from the 2010 park facilities are ball games and bpq sections are added fountain coverted into dancing fountain and benches will remain same Other place as picnic spot Kids playing area Transferred to opposite corners southwest corner of the park and this place bbk section was introduced walk from the added and the ball games introduced in the south east corner
The map
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the plan of which
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park
in 2010 and 15 and
also
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the prediction of 2020

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overall
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at the park.

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gone
under a
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in 5 years and
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more
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in futures.

In the year of 2010
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had one found in
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on the center
and eastern and northern west area was
fully
covered with a trace three menses were
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seen
in southwest
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corner
of the
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park
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in the
next
five years plants were
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down from the north street side and introduced a picnic sports followed by the cross
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corner
benches
were replaced
by kids playing area it was surprising to
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that the benches
were arranged
in circular directions around the fountain.

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Pak
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to more
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in future which was
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from the 2010
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facilities are ball games and
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bpq
sections are
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fountain
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into dancing fountain and benches will remain same Other place as picnic spot Kids playing area Transferred to opposite
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southwest
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and this place
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IELTS academic Park gone under few changes 2010 2015 and 2020

Academic
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195 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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