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The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago. m0Jn
The given maps depict the developments that have taken place in a village park over a decade. It can be seen that radical changes have taken place for 10 years. 10 years ago, the park was fairly simple, with the entrance at the north-west corner. The football pitch was there in the centre of the park, towards the north of which were two tennis courts and in the north-west, a car park to accommodate about 20 cars was there. A children’s play area was there on the north-east and towards the south-east were some woods and a pond. The second map shows that the park has undergone great changes in 10 years. A cycle path has been made all around the periphery of the park. The tennis courts have doubled and the car park has expanded to house about 50 cars. Children’s play area has not changed, but it has a soft children’s play area incorporated in the south. Toilets have been added towards the south of the children’s area. The pond has been converted into a boating lake and the trees have been cut to make a café. A picnic area has been made on the south-west side. Overall, the total area of the park is the same, but many things have been added and the functionality of the park has improved.
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maps depict the developments that have taken place in a village
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park
over a decade. It can be
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seen
that radical
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changes
have taken place for 10 years.

10 years ago, the
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was
fairly
simple, with the entrance at the north-west corner. The football pitch was there in the
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centre
of the
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park
, towards the north of which were two tennis courts and in the north-west, a
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car
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park
to accommodate about 20
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cars
was there. A
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children’s
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play


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area
was there on the north-east and towards the south-east were
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some
woods and a pond.

The second map
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shows
that the
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park
has undergone great
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in 10 years. A cycle path has
been made
all around the periphery of the
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park
. The tennis courts have doubled and the
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car
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park
has expanded to
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house
about 50
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cars
.
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Children’s
play
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area
has not
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changed
,
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it has a soft
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children’s
play
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incorporated in the south. Toilets have been
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added
towards the south of the
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children’s
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area
. The pond has
been converted
into a boating lake and the trees have been
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cut
to
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make
a café. A picnic
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area
has
been made
on the
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south-west


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side
.

Overall
, the total
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area
of the
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park
is the same,
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but
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many
things have been
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added
and the functionality of the
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park
has
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improved
.

IELTS academic The map shows the village park, now and 10 years ago.

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223 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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