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The diagram illustrates the information about the water cycle process between the water above the World’s surface and under the land. There are plenty of stages before the water becomes rain, which will be clarified in the following paragraph. From the ocean, initially, water will contribute around 80% of total vapour into the air because of heat from the sun, through the evaporation process, condensed the water vapour and become clouds. After that when the cloud is condensed sufficiently and format to be precipitation, such as snow and rain. The water from a sky could be contained as a lake, freezing and covering the mountain. When the ice is malted and runoff from the surface, the land will absorb the water as groundwater above an impervious layer. The groundwater will be returned to the sea and gradually mixed with the saltwater and ready to be conducted again.
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cycle process between the
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above the World’s surface and under the land. There are
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plenty
of stages
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before
the
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water
becomes rain, which will
be clarified
in the following paragraph.

From the ocean,
initially
,
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water
will contribute around 80% of total
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vapour
into the air
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because
of heat from the sun, through the evaporation process, condensed the
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water
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vapour
and become clouds. After that when the cloud
is condensed
sufficiently
and format to be precipitation, such as snow and rain. The
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water
from a sky could
be contained
as a lake, freezing and covering the mountain. When the ice
is malted
and runoff from the surface, the land will absorb the
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water
as groundwater above an impervious layer.

The groundwater will
be returned
to the sea and
gradually
mixed with the saltwater and ready to
be conducted
again.
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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