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The diagram illustrates the information about the waste from household material storage.the data is given in eighth steps.

The diagram illustrates the information about the waste from household material storage. the data is given in eighth steps. yN5OP
From the overall, process of disposal unit there are eigth steps in diagram like rotary ventilator, venilation fan, kitchen waste inlet, toilet composting chamber, compost removal hatch, air intake, composting tank. Analysing the data about waste household material things. in the first step one man is in kitchen waste though in the inlet. then, in the second step waste material move in composting chamber after that, waste move to compost removal hatch and, waste material collected in composting chamber. then, composting removal hatch is removed to waste. Furthermore, air is passed rotary ventilator. However, in the rotary ventilation air is moved through the help of ventulation fan.
From the
overall
, process of disposal unit there are
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eigth
steps in diagram like rotary ventilator,
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venilation
fan, kitchen
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waste
inlet, toilet
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composting
chamber, compost removal hatch, air intake,
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composting
tank.
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Analysing
the data about
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waste
household material things.
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in
the
first
step one
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man
is in kitchen
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waste
though in the inlet.
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then
, in the second step
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waste
material
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move
in
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composting
chamber after that,
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waste
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move
to compost removal hatch and,
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waste
material collected in
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composting
chamber.
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then
,
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composting
removal hatch
is removed
to
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waste
.
Furthermore
, air
is passed
rotary ventilator.
However
, in the rotary ventilation air is
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moved
through the
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help
of
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ventulation
fan.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the information about the waste from household material storage. the data is given in eighth steps.

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107 words
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