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The diagram demonstrates the recycling process of bottles which are made from plastics as soon as they are released by humans.

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The diagram demonstrates the recycling process of bottles which are made from plastics as soon as they are released by humans. Overall, it is noticeable that in order to recycle plastic bottles, there are 9 steps from the release of humans to process them and use them for producing and make other things. Firstly, It is obvious that as soon as finishing the plastic bottles are finished, people will throw them in a process area to go to the next step. The bottles which ís made from plastic will be transported by truck and then employees in the factory are sorting them at the recycling center. After that, plastic bottles will be blocked and crushing throughout an engine to create plastic debris. Secondly, the former step product will be used to produce plastic pellets and they will be heated under a particular temperature to create raw material. From that, the raw material will be used to produce household things such as new plastic bottles, boxes, pencils or etc. In the end, they will be used by humans and continuous new recycling circles.
The diagram demonstrates the recycling process of
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plastics
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soon
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plastic
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bottles
, there are 9 steps from the release of humans to process them and
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use
them for producing and
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make
other things.

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soon
as finishing the
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plastic
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bottles
are finished
,
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people
will throw them in a process area to go to the
next
step. The
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bottles
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plastic
will
be transported
by truck and then employees in the factory are sorting them at the recycling center. After that,
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plastic
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bottles
will
be blocked
and crushing throughout an engine to create
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plastic
debris.

Secondly
, the former step product will be
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used
to produce
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plastic
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pellets and
they will
be heated
under a particular temperature to create raw material. From that, the raw material will be
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used
to produce household things such as new
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plastic
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bottles
, boxes, pencils or etc. In the
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end
, they will be
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used
by humans and continuous new recycling circles.
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IELTS academic The diagram demonstrates the recycling process of bottles which are made from plastics as soon as they are released by humans.

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4 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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