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The diagram illustrates the evolution of the horse over a 40-million-year period.

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The diagram illustrates the evolution of the horse over a 40-million-year period. Overall, horses have gone through three main stages of physical development. Moreover, the foot structures have evolved from spread-out toes to a single hoof. 40 million years ago, the ancestor of the horse called Eohippus had a dog-sized body with some very primitive features such as a hairless back. After 10 million years, there was a noticeable development in the appearance of the horse. Particularly the Mesohippus was much bigger than Eohippus, with short hair and longer face. The horse went through the same evolution 5 million years later, when it was called Merychippus. Finally, after the period of 40 millions years, the modern horse has been significantly advanced. Compared to its ancestor, modern horses have bigger legs, longer hair as well as longer face. A remarkable factor is that the foot structure of the horse has changed significantly after 40 million years. The Eohippus had short limbs with four toes spreaded out. When predators started to appear, the toes of Mesohippus and Merychippus were only three and one of which was longest to create a symmetrical structure that facilitated its running ability. Finally, spread-out toes were completely replaced by a single hoof
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over a 40-million-year period.

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have gone through three main stages of physical development.
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, the foot structures have evolved from spread-out toes to a single hoof.

40
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years ago, the ancestor of the
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called
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Eohippus
had a dog-sized body with
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primitive features such as a hairless back. After 10
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years, there was a noticeable development in the appearance of the
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Mesohippus
was much bigger than
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Eohippus
, with short hair and longer face. The
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went through the same evolution 5
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Merychippus
.
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has been
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advanced. Compared to its ancestor, modern
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horses
have bigger legs, longer hair
as well
as longer face.

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has
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after 40
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Eohippus
had short limbs with four toes
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to appear, the toes of
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three and one of which was longest to create a symmetrical structure that facilitated its running ability.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the evolution of the horse over a 40-million-year period.

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