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The diagram illustrates how to produce milk and product by milk

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The diagram illustrates how to produce milk and product by milk In general, a closer look at the diagram highlights the fact that the process of producing milk involves 6 separate commencing with milking by machine twice a day and ending with displaying products in supermarkets for sale. Looking in the figure in the more detail, in the first stage of the process, the cows are fed. Milk is milked by machine twice a day which is preserved in refrigeration storage. In the Subsequently stage, it is delivered to dairy by milk tanker daily and prepared for the following stages. In the next stage of the process, in the factory, preserved milk is passed through many processing lines. After which, milk is either pasteurized and packed or produced dairy as cheese, cream and butter. The entire milk producing process concludes after milk and product by milk is transported to shops or supermarkets for sales to customers.

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 and product by milk

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process
 of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 involves 6 separate commencing with milking by machine twice a day and ending with displaying products in supermarkets for sale.

Looking in the figure in the more detail, in the first
 stage of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, the cows are fed
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
Milk
is milked
 by machine twice a day which is preserved
 in refrigeration storage. In the Subsequently
 stage, it is delivered
 to dairy by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 tanker daily and prepared for the following stages.

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 stage of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
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milk
is passed
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 processing lines. After which, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 is either pasteurized and packed or produced dairy as cheese, cream and butter. The entire You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
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milk
 and product by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is transported
 to shops or supermarkets for sales to customers. 