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The diagram illustrates how many elderly people were flu in various kinds of villages in the UK during the 10 years.

The diagram illustrates how many elderly people were flu in various kinds of villages in the UK during the 10 years. XqbWY

The diagram illustrates how many elderly people were flu in various kinds of villages in the UK during the 10 years. Overall, several unhealthy crowds in 1993 the figure reached the same level as in 1995 despite intense fluctuations during the years. Additionally, the number of people assemble had reached an enormous point throughout 1990-1991. At the beginning, count of sick people leveled off at 40 then rose markedly to just under 60, after 1986 until 1987 which were the maximum point in 1987. However, the number of people decreased noticeably between 2 years stood at nearly 50 after which had grown slowly. Besides, count of disease people increased dramatically from 1989 until 1990 which had reached an unexpected point in 1991. Although, flu went up gradually during the end of 1998 had reached 50 people otherwise, influenza dipped slowly between 1992-1993 had peaked at 60 people. Furthermore, the diagram had peaked at the same level as four times during the years.

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people
 were flu in various kinds of villages in the UK during the 10 years.

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people
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reached
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people
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people
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. Besides
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people
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reached
 an unexpected point in 1991. Although, flu went up gradually
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people
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, influenza dipped slowly
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people
. Furthermore
, the diagram had peaked at the same level as four times during the years. 