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The graph illustrates the unemployment percentage in Australia in four quarters in 2012 period.

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The graph illustrates the unemployment percentage in Australia in four quarters in 2012. Overall, the trend of being without a job rate in Rural zones gone down, then fluctuated, and remained stable ahead, while the trend of job loss rate in Urban sides climbed up, then fluctuated, and increased forward. First, the trend of unemployment level in Rural areas decreased shapely from the first quarter to the second quarter around 4. 5 percentage, and then this trend fluctuated between the second quarter and the third quarter. In addition, it remained stable until the fourth quarter approximately 5 proportion. However, the trend of job loss rate in Urban sides grew up dramatically from the first quarter to the second quarter around 4 percentage, and then this trend fluctuated from the second quarter to nearly the fourth quarter. Lastly, it increased forward in the fourth quarter around 4. 9 proportion.
The graph illustrates the unemployment percentage in Australia in four
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quarters
in 2012.

Overall
, the
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trend
of being without a job rate in Rural zones gone down, then
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fluctuated
, and remained stable ahead, while the
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trend
of job loss rate in Urban sides climbed up, then
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fluctuated
, and increased forward.

First
, the
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trend
of unemployment level in Rural areas decreased shapely from the
first
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quarter
to the second
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quarter
around 4. 5 percentage, and then this
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trend
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fluctuated
between the second
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quarter
and the third
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quarter
.
In addition
, it remained stable until the fourth
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quarter
approximately 5 proportion.

However
, the
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trend
of job loss rate in Urban sides grew up
dramatically
from the
first
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quarter
to the second
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quarter
around 4 percentage, and then this
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trend
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fluctuated
from the second
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quarter
to
nearly
the fourth
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quarter
.
Lastly
, it increased forward in the fourth
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quarter
around 4. 9 proportion.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the unemployment percentage in Australia in four quarters in 2012 period.

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