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The table below shows the evaluation of patients on three health care centres

The table below shows the evaluation of patients on three health care centres okrjw
The table illustrates the patients’ evaluations on various service at three health centre namely Longston centre, Peveril centre and Marchbank centre. Overall, it be seen that Peveril centre got the highest score from their customer, whereas, Longston centre is not likely to be highly recommended. Looking at the point of Longston health care center. It got 8. 0 for doctor’s service, which is followed by care of children with 6. 3. Following this, two services including booking appointments and pharmacy were rated the approximate number, with 5. 2 and 5. 1 respectively. Meanwhile, the only under-average figure in the table belonged to Longston’s response to concerns, which was just 4. 3. Lastly, Longston centre got 5. 8 for overall average. Turning to the feeback about Marchbank Centre, which was rated 7. 2 overall. Doctors’ service was also on top at 8. 4 and the coressponding figure for booking appointments and care of children was 7. 8 and 7. 3, which is comparatively good. Following this, 5. 8 was the point for response to concerns, slightly higher than pharmacy with a poor evaluation, 5. 8. Finally, Peveril was the best among three health care centres with the general mark being 8. 3 when the most well-rated service was response to concerns with nearly the ultimate mark (9. 6). Besides that, the remaining services also received considerably high score with 9. 1 for booking appointments, 8. 7 for doctors’service and 7. 5 for care of children. The lowest mark was 6. 3 for pharmacy, it’s still higher than other centres, though.
The table illustrates the patients’ evaluations on various
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Longston
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Looking at the point of
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Longston
health
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center. It
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8. 0 for doctor’s
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, which
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by
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care
of children with 6. 3. Following this, two
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services
including booking appointments and pharmacy
were rated
the approximate number, with 5. 2 and 5. 1
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. Meanwhile, the
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under-average figure in the table belonged to
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4. 3.
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Marchbank
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, which
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figure for booking appointments and
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of children was 7. 8 and 7. 3, which is
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Following this, 5. 8 was the point for response to concerns,
slightly
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Finally
,
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Peveril
was the best among three health
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with the general mark being 8. 3 when the most well-rated
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was response to concerns with
nearly
the ultimate mark (9. 6).
Besides
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also
received
considerably
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of children. The lowest mark was 6. 3 for pharmacy, it’s
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, though.
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