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This graph shows information about the number of the students who will I studied these three languages between 2020 and 2030

This graph shows information about the number of the students who will I studied these three languages between 2020 and 2030 Vw8am
This graph illustrates data about the number of people who will study these three languages over a ten-year period in the future between 2020 and 2030. Overall, the number of students who will study Mandarin or Spanish in this period has an increasing trend. Similarly, the number of English students has a rising trend, except in 2006. An interesting point in this graph is that, According to the predictions, English will be the most popular during the period and among these languages. With respect to Spanish, it will start at above 200 million students. Then, there will be a dramatic increase by around 100 million in 2022. After that, the figure grow gradually and until 2028. Finally, the number hit a peak in 2030. Regarding Mandarin, the figure will start at 100 million students, and then the number will start rocketing. In 2026, eat reach Spanish rate and after that it becomes more and more popular, and it peaks at just under 600 million students in 2030. Finally, English will be the most popular language with mostly improving trend in the whole period. To sum up, the line graph highlights some predictions about the popularity of three languages between 2020 and 2030.
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who will study Mandarin or Spanish in this period has an increasing trend.
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of English
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has a rising trend, except in 2006. An interesting point in this graph is that, According to the predictions, English will be the most popular during the period and among these languages.

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IELTS academic This graph shows information about the number of the students who will I studied these three languages between 2020 and 2030

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