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The diagram illustrates the difference between the navigation system and smartphone in prices of “high-tech” gadgets in somecountry over two years.

The diagram illustrates the difference between the navigation system and smartphone in prices of “high-tech” gadgets in somecountry over two years. gWrlg

The diagram illustrates the difference between the navigation system and smartphone in prices of “high-tech” gadgets in somecountry over two years. Overall, although the number of the navigation system and smartphones were different, the gap between both technology had closed each other at the end of the survey. Firstly, the navigation system which stood at 4000 dollars had decreased gradually the second half of 2004 until from the first half of 2005. Over the time prices of navigation system noticeably changed until the first part of 2006 had reached some amount which was less than 2004. Additionally, prices stood at 3500 dropped significantly by just under 2500 during the year 2006. At this time, smartphones levelled off 3000 in 2004, in comparison the smartphone’s prices less than navigation system although the gap between both marks narrowed towards at the end of the survey. Furthermore, dollars of smartphones markedly increased from 2005 until 2006 which was reached at the same level as two times in the one year. The prices of smartphones different from other years were maintained the same level at the end of 2006.

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