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The diagram illustates the process of making new paper from public places and businesses.

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The diagram illustates the process of making new paper from public places and businesses. Overall, there are six main steps in the process of new paper, beginning with the preparation of waste paper gather and ending at the paper making machine. At the beginning of the process, paper is collected from public paper banks and from businesses. This paper is then separated by woker and graded and unnecessary paper removed. After that paper can be transported and delivered to paper mill. At the fourth stage in process, the papers are bring cleaning, pulping and removal of other materials. Next, this papers are removad of inks and glues. Finally, the finished papers are put into machine manufacture of usable paper.
The diagram
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illustates
the
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process
of making new paper from public places and businesses.

Overall
, there are six main steps in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
process
of new paper, beginning with the preparation of waste paper gather and ending at the paper making machine.

At the beginning of the
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process
, paper
is collected
from public paper banks and from businesses. This paper is then separated by
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woker
and graded and unnecessary paper removed. After that paper can
be transported
and delivered to paper mill.

At the fourth stage in
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process
, the papers are
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bring
cleaning, pulping and removal of other materials.
Next
,
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this
papers are
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removad
of inks and glues.
Finally
, the finished papers
are put
into machine manufacture of usable paper.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustates the process of making new paper from public places and businesses.

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4 paragraphs
119 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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