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Percentage of children attended at four school types during 2000, 2005 & 2009

Percentage of children attended at four school types during 2000, 2005 & 2009 b2roq

The bar graph depicts the information about percentile of children attended at four school type during 2000, 2005 and 2009. Overview, it is noticed that the maximum proportion of students had attended voluntary-controlled school and community school, whereas, percentage for community school was increased by the time. By analyzing the table chart, it is clear that a marginal difference of 1% is witnessed for specialist school attendance of kids that was decreased from 12 to 10% in 2000 to 2009. Moreover, grammar school attended by the pupils was declined by 5% between 2000 and 2005, 7% in 2009, repectively. Furthermore, in case of voluntary-controlled school attendance remained highest among other schools during three different year that was 52 and 38 but in 2000 it was 20%, only. In addition to this, attendance by children in community school was nearly thrice in second year than in the initial year that is 58% in last year.

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