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The chart demonstrated the amount of oil that six countries in the Middle-East of Asia had been producing from 1990 to 2010.

The chart demonstrated the amount of oil that six countries in the Middle-East of Asia had been producing from 1990 to 2010. KVy59
The chart demonstrated the amount of oil that six countries in the Middle-East of Asia had been producing from 1990 to 2010. Overall, Saudi Arabia was the country that stood out significantly with the highest numbers of oil productions, while Qatar accounted for a modest number of total petrol containment. As mentioned above, it was Saudi Arabia that produced the highest amount of oil with a sharp increase from more than 8 million barrels per day in 1990 to over 14 millions in 2010. With regards to UAE, Kuwait, Iraq and Iran, those nations witnessed the same pattern of oil production development, which was 2 to around 4 millions for 20 years. Standing in the last rank, Qatar distributed a little amount of oil as the chart line remained stable with only approximately 2 million barrels per day.
The chart demonstrated the amount of
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that six countries in the Middle-East of Asia had been producing from 1990 to 2010.

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, Saudi Arabia was the country that stood out
significantly
with the highest numbers of
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oil
productions, while Qatar accounted for a modest number of total petrol containment.

As mentioned above, it was Saudi Arabia that produced the highest amount of
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oil
with a sharp increase from more than 8
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million
barrels per day in 1990 to over 14
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millions
in 2010.
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UAE, Kuwait, Iraq and Iran, those nations witnessed the same pattern of
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production development, which was 2 to around 4
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for 20 years. Standing in the last rank, Qatar distributed a
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amount of
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as the chart line remained stable with
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approximately 2
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barrels per day.
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IELTS academic The chart demonstrated the amount of oil that six countries in the Middle-East of Asia had been producing from 1990 to 2010.

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