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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. N7Lj

The figure here elaborates how the carbonated drinks used to manufacture and supply to the market. first and foremost step is water cleaning in which the raw water is filtered before adding water softeners or some chemicals and it is then send to pump where the heating process takes place via electric heaters. In second step the filtered water is heated and it is passed via a cooling pipe to a big chamber where carbon dioxide is added to it. The carbonated water is then passed to a mixing tank. In third step there is a mixing of syrup with carbonated water takes place also color and flavor are added at same step. After mixing properly it is again filtered and then filled to bottles and cans and finally they put them in big cartoons so that they can easily transported and supplied to the market.

The figure here elaborates how the carbonated drinks This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to manufacture and supply to the market. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirst
first
 and foremost You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 cleaning in which the raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is filtered
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 adding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 softeners or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 chemicals and it is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 to pump where the heating process takes place via electric heaters.

In second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 the filtered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is heated
 and it is passed
 via a cooling pipe to a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 chamber where carbon dioxide is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to it. The carbonated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 is then passed to a mixing tank.

In third You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 there is a mixing of syrup with carbonated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 takes place also
 color and flavor are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 at same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
. After mixing properly
 it is again filtered and then filled to bottles and cans and finally
 they put them in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 cartoons This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they can easily
The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "transport"transport
transported
 and supplied to the market. 