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The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. B98j
The bar chart compares the male and female teacher's ratio in 6 different levels of educational institutions in the UK in 2010. Overall, the percentage of female teachers tends to decrease significantly depend on the increasing level of the educational system, while the figure for male teachers went up. In college proportion, male and female do teaching job are equal. In terms of pre-school, the percentage of women in the UK was highest accounted for 95%, while the figure for men was significantly lower at only 5 %. In primary school, 90% of women, compared to 10 % of men. There were 50% women teachers in secondary school, higher than men teachers about 45%. The percentage of male and female teachers accounted for 45% and 50% respectively in a private training institute. In university, the proportion of women declined to 30 % while the percentage of males higher than females approximately 40%.
The bar chart compares the male and
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teacher's ratio in 6
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different
levels of educational institutions in the UK in 2010.

Overall
, the
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percentage
of
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female
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teachers
tends to decrease
significantly
depend on the increasing level of the educational system, while the figure for male
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teachers
went up. In college proportion, male and
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female
do teaching job are equal.

In terms of
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, the
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of
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women
in the UK was highest accounted for 95%, while the figure for
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was
significantly
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only
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primary school, 90% of
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, compared to 10 % of
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men
.

There were 50%
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women
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teachers
in secondary school, higher than
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men
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teachers
about 45%. The
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percentage
of male and
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female
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teachers
accounted for 45% and 50%
respectively
in a private training institute. In university, the proportion of
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women
declined to 30 % while the
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of
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males
higher than
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females
approximately 40%.
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