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The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. BkOV

The diagram illustrates how to produce carbonated beverages. Overall, it is clear from the chart that there are 5 steps in order to make this product. Production of carbonated drinks start with cleaning water, heating, mixing and containing drinks into bottles and cans before packing and sending the products to supermarket. The first step of production line is water cleaning water through the filter, water softener and using chemicals then machine will pump clean water to electric heater in the second step. At this step, heat will be use in effort to evaporate the water, after that, cooling the water tempurature down in the cooling pipe before it combines with carbon dioxcide. Next stage is mixing color, syrup and flavour in a mixing tank. So you can get the carbonated drinks at this stage however it still not ready to sale. The producer must to filtering and filling into their packaging which are either bottles or cans. Finally, the last stage is distributed their products to supermarket.

The diagram illustrates how to produce carbonated beverages. Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the chart that there are 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
steps
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this product. Production of carbonated drinks This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 with cleaning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, heating, mixing and containing drinks into bottles and cans This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 packing and sending the products to supermarket.

The first
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
 of production line is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 cleaning You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 through the filter, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 softener and using chemicals then machine will pump clean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 to electric heater in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
. At this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstride
step
, heat will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 in effort to evaporate the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
, after that, cooling the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
Possible spelling mistake found.temperature
tempurature
 down in the cooling pipe This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 it combines with carbon Possible spelling mistake found.dioxide
dioxcide
.

Next
 stage is mixing color, syrup and Possible spelling mistake. 'flavour' is British English.flavor
flavour
 in a mixing tank. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the carbonated drinks at this stage however
 it still
 not ready to sale. The producer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 to filtering and filling into their packaging which are either bottles or cans. Finally
, the last stage is distributed
 their products to supermarket. 