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The different levels and the required machines for making cement are depicted in the diagram.

The different levels and the required machines for making cement are depicted in the diagram. mwpn

The different levels and the required machines for making cement are depicted in the diagram. Also, it includes the processes of using cement to produce concrete, which is consumed for construction. Overall, the production of cement requires devices for some stages, whereas, producing concrete needs one. Moreover, for making concrete various substances should be used. Firstly, limestone and clay are introduced to a crasher together for producing a powder. Secondly, this powder is blended by a mixer and, then it is entered into a rotating heater and while it is rotating, it is warmed by the flame of a heater. After that, the heated powder is turned to cement after passing a grinder. Finally, cement is packed in bags. In addition to this, cement and some other materials should be mixed for the purpose of producing concrete, which consists of 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% small stones. All of them are put in a concrete mixer and by blending them, concrete is made.

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