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The information regarding the percentage of men and woman were divided into 3 weight categories in one nation from 1999 to 2009 has depicted in the graph. At the first glance, 27% of women were underweight in 1999 but male were 22% and normal weight of women were accounted for 42% however male were 7% least to women. More men were overweight in year 1999 as compared to women. After four years, underweight women were increased to 29% and male were dropped to 20%. Observing further, those who were overweight in 2004 had a very negligible difference between men and women which was only 1%. There were 51% women in normal weight category and male were increased to 48%. It is noticed that in 2009 overweight and normal weight men and women shared the same proportion which was 47% of women and male were overweight and 19% of men and women were normal weight respectively. In underweight category women were dropped to 1% And males were increased by 3% in 2009. Overall, it is experience that

The information regarding the percentage of men and woman were divided into 3 weight categories in one nation from 1999 to 2009 has depicted in the graph. At the first glance, 27% of women were underweight in 1999 but male were 22% and normal weight of women were accounted for 42% however male were 7% least to women. More men were overweight in year 1999 as compared to women. After four years, underweight women were increased to 29% and male were dropped to 20%. Observing further, those who were overweight in 2004 had a very negligible difference between men and women which was only 1%. There were 51% women in normal weight category and male were increased to 48%. It is noticed that in 2009 overweight and normal weight men and women shared the same proportion which was 47% of women and male were overweight and 19% of men and women were normal weight respectively. In underweight category women were dropped to 1% And males were increased by 3% in 2009. Overall, it is experience that axW9
The information regarding the percentage of men and woman were divided into 3 weight categories in one nation from 1999 to 2009 has depicted in the graph. At the first glance, 27% of women were underweight in 1999 but male were 22% and normal weight of women were accounted for 42% however male were 7% least to women. More men were overweight in year 1999 as compared to women. After four years, underweight women were increased to 29% and male were dropped to 20%. Observing further, those who were overweight in 2004 had a very negligible difference between men and women which was only 1%. There were 51% women in normal weight category and male were increased to 48%. It is noticed that in 2009 overweight and normal weight men and women shared the same proportion which was 47% of women and male were overweight and 19% of men and women were normal weight respectively. In underweight category women were dropped to 1% And males were increased by 3% in 2009. Overall, it is experience that women were more in all weights groups as compare to men.
The information regarding the percentage of
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were divided
into 3
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weight
categories in one nation from 1999 to 2009 has depicted in the graph.

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first
glance, 27% of
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women
were underweight in 1999
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but
male were 22% and
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normal
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weight
of
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women
were accounted
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however
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women
. More
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men
were
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overweight
in year 1999 as compared to
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women
. After four years, underweight
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women
were increased
to 29% and male
were dropped
to 20%.

Observing
further
, those who were
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overweight
in 2004 had a
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very
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women
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women
in
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category and male
were increased
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and
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normal
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shared the same proportion which was 47% of
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women
and male were
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were
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respectively
. In underweight category
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women
were dropped
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were increased
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Overall
, it is experience that
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women
were more in all
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IELTS academic The information regarding the percentage of men and woman were divided into 3 weight categories in one nation from 1999 to 2009 has depicted in the graph. At the first glance, 27% of women were underweight in 1999 but male were 22% and normal weight of women were accounted for 42% however male were 7% least to women. More men were overweight in year 1999 as compared to women. After four years, underweight women were increased to 29% and male were dropped to 20%. Observing further, those who were overweight in 2004 had a very negligible difference between men and women which was only 1%. There were 51% women in normal weight category and male were increased to 48%. It is noticed that in 2009 overweight and normal weight men and women shared the same proportion which was 47% of women and male were overweight and 19% of men and women were normal weight respectively. In underweight category women were dropped to 1% And males were increased by 3% in 2009. Overall, it is experience that

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