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The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. 5nlN

The picture depicts the manufacturing process of the bricks for the construction industry utilization. In the upstream, the process is started from clay-sized soil mining grasped by an excavator. The clay bulks then are fined by metal-based refinery to produce homogenous finer grain sized prior to conveying step on the roller belt. After that, the mixed of sand plus water are poured into clayed soil substances in order to be formed in bricks either using wire cutter or mould utensil. Subsequently, the more humid bricks which has been formed will be dried over 24-48 hours in special oven. This oven process will pass three primary phases where the whole bricks are baked in moderate temperature (200oC-980oC) in the first phase before entering the higher temperature (870oC-1300oC) baking process. As the last drying step, the bricks are having cooling down process inside the specific chamber over 48-72 hours. In the downstream area, after the bricks are completely losing their moisture content, the dry bricks are ready to be packaged as a main requirement to delivery commercially to the market by four-wheeled container trucks.

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bricks
 for the construction industry utilization.

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process
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started
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 sand plus water are poured
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clayed
 soil substances in order to be formed
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bricks
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mould
 utensil. Subsequently
, the more humid You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 which has been formed
 will be dried
 over 24-48 hours in special oven. This oven You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 will pass three primary phases where the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are baked
 in moderate temperature (200oC-980oC) in the first
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before
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process
. As the last drying step, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are having cooling down You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 inside the specific chamber over 48-72 hours. In the downstream area, after the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are completely losing their moisture content, the dry You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are ready to be packaged
 as a main requirement to delivery commercially
 to the market by four-wheeled container trucks. 