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The diagram explains the way in which coffee is manufactured to pack and sell by a dry method.

The diagram explains the way in which coffee is manufactured to pack and sell by a dry method. GrqNm
The diagram sketches out various steps in the illustration of coffee production with the dry method. Overall, as can be seen from the chart, there are numerous steps in the process, beginning by sorting beans, and finishing by packing in order to retail to the customers. Looking at the chart in more detail, after being sorted by hand, the beans are cleaned through a sieve to remove dirt and other materials. Subsequently, people spread them under the sun for 4 weeks, while they are raked and turned to ensure they dry sufficiently. Following a period of storing in the silo, they are transported to the factory by a large truck. Turning to the remaining step, after hulling, farmers filter them with the purpose of grading by using a bracket. At the mill, they are packaged in bags and sold. In the final step, they are roasted to be ready for packing and dealing with the customers.
The diagram sketches out various
steps
in the illustration of coffee production with the dry method.
Overall
, as can be
seen
from the chart, there are numerous
steps
in the process, beginning by sorting beans, and finishing by packing in order to retail to the customers.

Looking at the chart in more detail, after
being sorted
by hand, the beans
are cleaned
through a sieve to remove dirt and other materials.
Subsequently
,
people
spread them under the sun for 4 weeks, while they
are raked
and turned to ensure they dry
sufficiently
. Following a period of storing in the silo, they
are transported
to the factory by a large truck.

Turning to the remaining
step
, after hulling, farmers filter them with the purpose of grading by using a bracket. At the mill, they
are packaged
in bags and sold. In the final
step
, they
are roasted
to be ready for packing and dealing with the customers.
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IELTS academic The diagram explains the way in which coffee is manufactured to pack and sell by a dry method.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
156 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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