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The maps represent the changes made in the seaside resort called Templeton from 1990 to 2005. Overall, majority areas were placed for resident housings in 1990 and which changed to the commercial areas by 2005. Most of housings have substituted by buildings and factories. A school and hospital located in North-east of Templeton have remained unchanged. In 1990, majority parts of Templeton were used for housing purposes. In fact, all the areas in the West side of Templeton were residential areas and in the East, there were fewer houses. By 2005, most of Templeton became crowded with buildings. The housings that located in West had replaced with tall buildings and a large supermarket had built I the middle of those buildings. Meanwhile, a factory, ferry and airport had newly constructed. A factory and ferry were located in South-West and South-East of Templeton respectively, whereas airport was sited on the North-West of sites, next to the schools. In addition, new railway roads that connect between west and east of areas had also newly built.

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changes
 made in the seaside resort called Templeton from 1990 to 2005.

Overall
, majority You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
were placed
 for resident housings in 1990 and which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to the commercial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 by 2005. After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ("Most of the housings") or simply say "Most housings".Most of the housingsMost housings
Most of housings
 have substituted by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
 and factories. A school and hospital located in North-east of Templeton have remained unchanged.

In 1990, majority parts of Templeton were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for housing purposes. In fact, all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 in the West side of Templeton were residential You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 and in the East, there were fewer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
.

By 2005, most of Templeton became crowded with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
. The housings that located in West had replaced with tall You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
 and a large supermarket had built I the middle of those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
. Meanwhile, a factory, ferry and airport had newly
 constructed. A factory and ferry were located
 in South-West and South-East of Templeton respectively
, whereas airport was sited
 on the North-West of sites, next
 to the schools. In addition
, new railway roads that connect between west and east of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 had also
newly
 built. 