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The given line graph compare the three law breaking offenses, namely car theft, house burgalary and Street robbery, in two countries, which is England and Wales, between 1970 and 2005. The number of crimes counted in millions. Overall it can be seen that, cases of car thefts were maximum and Street robbery were minimum among the given crimes and an upward trend was showed in the graph. The cases of car theft were highest throughout the entire period when compared to others. At first, in 1970, the count of the cases stood at 0. 2 million, whereas it gradually rised over the period from 1970 to 1990 and reached 1 million at last year. However, the following year witnessed a rapid increase and hit a high of 1. 6 million. In the next decade, 1995 to 2005, the number of car theft fell significantly to just below 1 million. The number of house bargalary showed a similar trend as car theft for the first 10 year, after which the number of fluctuated and reached 0. 5 million by 2005. Number of street robbery were remains stable and till 1990, then there was a considerable growth in the cases, over the next decade and reached 0. 2 million. After that there was a stability in street robbery.
The
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given
line graph compare the three law breaking offenses,
namely
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car
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theft
,
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house
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burgalary
and
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Street
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robbery
, in two countries, which is England and Wales, between 1970 and 2005. The
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number
of crimes counted in millions.

Overall
it can be
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seen
that, cases of
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car
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thefts
were maximum and
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Street
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robbery
were minimum among the
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given
crimes and an upward trend was
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showed
in the graph.

The cases of
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car
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theft
were
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highest
throughout the entire period when compared to others. At
first
, in 1970, the count of the cases stood at 0. 2
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million
, whereas it
gradually
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rised
over the period from 1970 to 1990 and reached 1
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million
at last year.
However
, the following year witnessed a rapid increase and hit a high of 1. 6
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million
. In the
next
decade, 1995 to 2005, the
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number
of
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car
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theft
fell
significantly
to
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just
below 1 million.

The
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number
of
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house
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bargalary
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showed
a similar trend as
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car
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theft
for the
first
10 year, after which the
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number
of fluctuated and reached 0. 5
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million
by
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2005. Number
of
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street
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robbery
were remains stable and till 1990, then there was a considerable growth in the cases, over the
next
decade and reached 0. 2
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million
.
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After
that there was a stability in
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street
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robbery
.

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5.0
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