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The charts below demonstrate why students in different age groups study and how they are supported by the employers. Overall, as the age of groups become older, the intention of learning for career decreased by ages and learning for interest is opposed. For groups that above 30 years old, the time and fees support from employer are lower than the below 30 groups’. At the first glance, we can easily see that under 26 student have the highest intension in learning for career, at 80, in contrast with the one that learn for interest at the lowest at 10. The statistics for career’s study started to plummet about 10 to 20 units as the groups get older, stopped at over 49 group at the lowest number of nearly 20 units while interest purposes start to rise at the lowest figure of under 26 students and have the highest at 70 as the oldest group possess. As the young age come, the time off and helps that students who is under 26 have the highest at nearly 70 units while 30-39 age group have the least with just over 30 units. 40-49 age groups and over 49 do not have a high number as under 26 have, just nearly 40 and 50, respectively.

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