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the proportions of sale commodity in various types.

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The pie chats illustrate the proportions of sale commodity in various types. Overall, a major change was expected in what people spend moneyin2014. In 2012, other products is the most common bought of people with surprisingly 82%, on the contrary after 2 years, these profit is replaced with computer game and tablet products. There was an over 4 times increased in the number of tablets sale from 8% to 34% after the time shown in the charts. The same goes for computer game products with roughly quadrupled from 10% to 41% leading it the main selling work in 2014. Other brand was the only line that got decreased in the sale point. A dramatic drop of rate witnessed after 2 years to 25%, over one-third of 2012. The eightfold growth on the volume of international trade since the Second World War has provided continuing evidence of GATT's success in the double role. In brief, the other tools was replaced by the modern technology.
The pie chats illustrate the proportions of sale commodity in various types.

Overall
, a major
change
was
expected
in what
people
spend moneyin2014. In 2012, other products is the most common
bought
of
people
with
surprisingly
82%,
on the contrary
after 2 years, these profit
is replaced
with computer game and tablet products.

There was an over 4 times increased in the number of tablets sale from 8% to 34% after the time shown in the charts. The same goes for computer game products with roughly quadrupled from 10% to 41% leading it the main selling work in 2014.

Other brand was the
only
line that
got
decreased in the sale point. A dramatic drop of rate witnessed after 2 years to 25%, over one-third of 2012. The eightfold growth on the volume of international trade since the Second World War has provided continuing evidence of GATT's success in the double role.

In brief
, the other tools
was replaced
by the modern technology.
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IELTS academic the proportions of sale commodity in various types.

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163 words
6.5
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