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The diagram describes a process of manufacturing orange juice

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The diagram shows in detail how orange juice is producced before you get to the consumer. The first quality orange juice is required to select quality, fresh oranges and transport them by container to the factory to clean the oranges. Next, oranges are then cut in two and inserted into a press so that the bones can be extracted. Waste solids are collected and used as food for animals, while fresh juices are packed and sent to supermarkets or shipped to other plants by trucks in the refrigerator to undergo evaporation processes. At the following steps, the orange water is treated in evaporators to evaporate the water into the air. The concentrated juice is then canned and shipped to warehouses before being joined by the water in the production plant. After that, orange juice will be packaged and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be purchased by consumer.
The diagram
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shows
in detail how orange
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juice
is
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producced
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before
you
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get
to

the consumer.

The
first
quality orange
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juice
is required
to select quality, fresh oranges and

transport them by container to the factory to clean the oranges.
Next
, oranges

are then
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cut
in two and inserted into a press
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so
that the bones can
be extracted
.

Waste solids
are collected
and
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used
as food for animals, while fresh
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juices
are packed
and
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sent
to supermarkets or shipped to other plants by trucks in the

refrigerator to undergo evaporation processes.

At the following steps, the orange water
is treated
in evaporators to evaporate

the water into the air. The concentrated
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juice
is then canned and shipped to

warehouses
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before
being
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joined
by the water in the production plant. After that,

orange
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juice
will
be packaged
and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be

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purchased
by consumer.

IELTS academic The diagram describes a process of manufacturing orange juice

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
147 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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