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The diagram describes a process of manufacturing orange juice

The diagram describes a process of manufacturing orange juice G91Vw

The diagram shows in detail how orange juice is producced before you get to the consumer. The first quality orange juice is required to select quality, fresh oranges and transport them by container to the factory to clean the oranges. Next, oranges are then cut in two and inserted into a press so that the bones can be extracted. Waste solids are collected and used as food for animals, while fresh juices are packed and sent to supermarkets or shipped to other plants by trucks in the refrigerator to undergo evaporation processes. At the following steps, the orange water is treated in evaporators to evaporate the water into the air. The concentrated juice is then canned and shipped to warehouses before being joined by the water in the production plant. After that, orange juice will be packaged and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be purchased by consumer.

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shows
 in detail how orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
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producced
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before
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to

the consumer.

The first
 quality orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is required
 to select quality, fresh oranges and

transport them by container to the factory to clean the oranges. Next
, oranges

are then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 in two and inserted into a press This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the bones can be extracted
.

Waste solids are collected
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used
 as food for animals, while fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juices
are
packed
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to supermarkets or shipped to other plants by trucks in the

refrigerator to undergo evaporation processes.

At the following steps, the orange water is treated
 in evaporators to evaporate

the water into the air. The concentrated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 is then canned and shipped to

warehouses This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 by the water in the production plant. After that,

orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 will be packaged
 and distributed to supermarkets, ready to be

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 by consumer. 