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The map illustrate that the development in Dubai city in the recent decade.

The map illustrate that the development in Dubai city in the recent decade. bxgjq

The map illustrate that the development in Dubai city in the recent decade. We can observe that Dubai city is noticeably different after the time. Especially, the number of vehicles increase a lot in the present time. In the center of the city, the symbol figure is still the same in Dubai. The road and land don't change or expand after the decade, although there is a lot of building be built in present time. The city is obviously different nowadays, plans have been removed and be replaced by skyscrapers and buildings. While the city was significantly deserted in the past. In the recent decade, It is very crowded and full of cars in Dubai.

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illustrate
 that the development in Dubai city in the recent decade.

We can observe that Dubai city is noticeably
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 after the time. Especially
, the number of vehicles increase a lot in the present time.

In the center of the city, the symbol figure is still
 the same in Dubai. The road and land don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 or expand after the decade, although there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 building be built
 in present time.

The city is obviously
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 nowadays, plans have been removed
 and be replaced
 by skyscrapers and buildings. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 the city was significantly
 deserted in the past. In the recent decade, It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 crowded and full of cars in Dubai. 