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The presented line graph illustrates information on car ownership in the UK throughout the years from 1975 to 2005.

The presented line graph illustrates information on car ownership in the UK throughout the years from 1975 to 2005. 9w8e7
The presented line graph illustrates information on car ownership in the UK throughout the years from 1975 to 2005. As is observed, it is conspicuous that the percent of car ownership in the UK clearly divided into two parts. In the years from 1975 to 1985, the rate of substantially change but compared to the percent of the car during 1985-2005 tediously changes. Now, turning to the details in first 10 years, the percent one car and no car were trended in both decreased rapidly respectively 7% and 18%. On the contrary, two cars and three cars had a growth slightly. Two cars rose 7% and three cars climbed a tiny portion about 2%. On the other hand, during 1985-2005, one car increased an insignificant proportion about 7% and no car had a fall a little more than 2% in the years from 1985 to 1995 and continued declining to 2005. As much as, the percent of two cars nearly the same as three cars and trended in both uplifted gradually so it could be predicted to go up significantly in the near future. From the graphs, it is quite evident that the number of car ownership will increase rapidly more than no car. In the future, it is a great vehicle useful for people.
The presented line graph illustrates information on
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car
ownership in the UK throughout the years from 1975 to 2005.

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is observed
, it is conspicuous that the
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percent
of
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car
ownership in the UK
clearly
divided into two parts. In the years from 1975 to 1985, the rate of
substantially
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change
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but
compared to the
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percent
of the
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car
during 1985-2005
tediously
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changes
.

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Now
, turning to the
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details
in
first
10 years, the
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percent
one
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car
and no
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car
were trended
in both decreased
rapidly
respectively
7% and 18%.
On the contrary
, two
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cars
and three
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cars
had a growth
slightly
. Two
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cars
rose 7% and three
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cars
climbed a tiny portion about 2%.
On the other hand
, during 1985-2005, one
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car
increased an insignificant proportion about 7% and no
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car
had a fall a
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little
more than 2% in the years from 1985 to 1995 and continued declining to 2005. As much as, the
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percent
of two
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cars
nearly
the same as three
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cars
and trended in both uplifted
gradually
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so
it could
be predicted
to go up
significantly
in the near future.

From the graphs, it is quite evident that the number of
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car
ownership will increase
rapidly
more than no
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car
. In the future, it is a great vehicle useful for
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people
.
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IELTS academic The presented line graph illustrates information on car ownership in the UK throughout the years from 1975 to 2005.

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4 paragraphs
215 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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