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THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CHANGES TOOK PLACE AT A HEALTH CENTRE FROM YEAR 2005 TILL PRESENT DAY.SUMMARIZE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURE AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT

THE MAP BELOW SHOW THE CHANGES TOOK PLACE AT A HEALTH CENTRE FROM YEAR 2005 TILL PRESENT DAY. jVqXd
THE GIVE TWO MAPS ILLUSTATES THE CHANGES EXPERIENCED BY HEALTH CENTRE FROM 2005 TO PRSENT DAY. OVERALL, THE HELATH CENTRE FACED SIGNIFICANT CHANGES IN GIVEN PERIOD AS THERE MUCH FACILITIES INTRODUCED IN CURRENT PLAN. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, THE ENTRANCE OF CENTRE IS MOVES FROM SOUTH SIDE TO WEST SIDE OF PLAN AND IN THE RIGHT SIDE OF ENTRANCE THE CHILDREN PLAY ROOM IS DEVELOPED. CAR PARKING SPACE IN 2005 IS FOR 12 CARS AND IN PRESENT DAY IT THE SPACE IS ELEVATED FOR 30 VEHICLES. WHILE, RECEPTION AREA IN NORTH SIDE OF CENTRE REPLACED TO NEAR ENTRANCE. THE MAP FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE CARPET ARE FOR CR1 AND CR2 DIMINISHED IN 15 YEARS WHEREAS, THE PLACE FOR CR3 ENLARGED. NEW ROOM CR4 IS INTRODUCED IN EAST OF PLAN MERELY BELOW TO PHSIOTHERAPY ROOM. FINALLY, MINOR OPERATION ROOM IS CONSTRUCTED NEAR OFFICE IN CURRENT MAP.
THE GIVE TWO MAPS
ILLUSTATES
THE
CHANGES
EXPERIENCED BY HEALTH
CENTRE
FROM 2005 TO
PRSENT
DAY.

OVERALL
, THE
HELATH
CENTRE
FACED SIGNIFICANT
CHANGES
IN
GIVEN
PERIOD AS THERE
MUCH
FACILITIES INTRODUCED IN
CURRENT
PLAN.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, THE ENTRANCE OF
CENTRE
IS
MOVES
FROM SOUTH SIDE TO WEST SIDE OF PLAN AND
IN THE RIGHT SIDE
OF ENTRANCE THE CHILDREN PLAY
ROOM
IS DEVELOPED
. CAR PARKING SPACE IN 2005 IS FOR 12 CARS AND IN PRESENT DAY IT THE SPACE
IS ELEVATED
FOR 30 VEHICLES. WHILE, RECEPTION AREA IN NORTH SIDE OF
CENTRE
REPLACED TO NEAR ENTRANCE.

THE MAP
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE CARPET ARE FOR CR1 AND CR2 DIMINISHED IN 15 YEARS WHEREAS, THE PLACE FOR CR3 ENLARGED. NEW
ROOM
CR4
IS INTRODUCED
IN EAST OF PLAN
MERELY
BELOW TO
PHSIOTHERAPY
ROOM
.
FINALLY
, MINOR OPERATION
ROOM
IS CONSTRUCTED
NEAR OFFICE IN
CURRENT
MAP.
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