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The diagram show the process of brick manufacturing for building .

The diagram show the process of brick manufacturing for building. kW3wM

The diagram illustrates the procedure of brick manufacturing for building and seven steps are involved in it. To begin with, digger is used for digging the clay to make bricks. in the second step, clay is putted into roller as well as sort out with the help of metal grid then sand and water are added into it for further work. In the next step, this mixture are cuted and shaped through two various ways: wire cutter and mould to give the shapes to bricks. After that, it has been stored into drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. Probing further, it have being shift in to kiln for pre heat at 200 ° C and 980 ° C. After moderate heat, it are heating on high level at 870° C to 1300°C in kiln then bricks cooled for 4 to 6 days after cooling it send for packaging process then completing package it is delivered, with the help of heavy vehicles like trucks, to building. Overall, manufacturing bricks are liner process and seven steps are involved in it, starting from digging clay through digger and ending with delivery to place by truck.

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