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. The diagram demonstrates how the corn is processed into ethanol fuel. Overall, it is clear that the ethanol fuel making process has 8 stages, starting with storing corn and finishing with delivering products. In order to produce ethanol fuel, there are both physical and biological impacts on the corn. At the first stage of the process, the corn is harvested and stored. After that, the next step is milling the corn into flour before the cooking stage. As soon as water is added and the corn is cooked for 4 hours. Then, fermenting the corn starts and this stage will complete in 48 hours. Subsequently, the fermented compound goes through a separation stage divides which produces into 2 parts which are liquid ethanol fluid mix and the solid by-product which will be eliminated/discarded. Once the compound is digested, The liquid part is going to be refined for 5 hours for the purpose of removing impurities/contaminants. And tThe output of the purification clarifying stage is the pure ethanol. After that, the ethanol fuel is stored before being shipped and the final step is shipping to gas stationsthe market
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The diagram demonstrates how the
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is processed
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ethanol
fuel.

Overall
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that the
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ethanol
fuel making process has 8
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stages
, starting with storing
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corn
and finishing with delivering products. In order to produce
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ethanol
fuel, there are both physical and biological impacts on the corn.

At the
first
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stage
of the process, the
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corn
is harvested
and stored. After that, the
next
step is milling the
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corn
into flour
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before
the cooking
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stage
. As
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soon
as water is
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added
and the
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is cooked
for 4 hours. Then, fermenting the
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corn
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starts
and this
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will complete in 48 hours.

Subsequently
, the fermented compound goes through a separation
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stage
divides which produces into 2 parts which are liquid
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ethanol
fluid mix and the solid by-product which will
be eliminated
/discarded. Once the compound
is digested
, The liquid part is going to
be refined
for 5 hours for the purpose of removing impurities/contaminants. And
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output of the purification clarifying
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stage
is the pure
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ethanol
. After that, the
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ethanol
fuel
is stored
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before
being shipped
and the final step is shipping to gas
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