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The diagram demonstrates how a solar powered water pump is used to supply water for a village.

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The diagram demonstrates how a solar powered water pump is used to supply water for a village. There are three main components to the system: a solar panel, an underground bore or well with a water pump inside it, and a tank for holding the water after it has been pumped up from the underground source. The first part of the process involves collecting sunlight to power the pump. A solar panel consisting of photo-voltaic cells is mounted, facing the sun, on a raised pole well above the ground. DC electricity is collected when the panel is exposed to sunlight. This DC current travels from the panel to power a water pump, which is suspended below the water level inside an underground well or bore. The DC power is used to pump water from the well into an outlet pipe which runs from the pump up the well through the bore cap and into the top of a water tank which is situated on the ground nearby. The water then runs in a pipe to a village, where it provides fresh water to the residents.
The diagram demonstrates how a solar powered
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pump
is
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used
to supply
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water
for a village. There are three main components to the system: a solar
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panel
, an underground bore or
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well
with a
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water
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pump
inside it, and a tank for holding the
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water
after it has
been pumped
up from the underground source.

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first
part of the process involves collecting sunlight to power the
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pump
. A solar
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panel
consisting of photo-voltaic cells
is mounted
, facing the sun, on a raised pole
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well
above the ground.
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DC electricity
is collected
when the
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panel
is exposed
to sunlight. This DC
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current
travels from the
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panel
to power a
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water
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pump
, which
is suspended
below the
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water
level inside an underground
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well
or bore.

The DC power is
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used
to
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pump
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water
from the
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well
into an outlet pipe which runs from the
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pump
up the
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well
through the bore cap and into the top of a
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water
tank which
is situated
on the ground nearby. The
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water
then runs in a pipe to a village, where it provides fresh
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water
to the residents.

IELTS academic The diagram demonstrates how a solar powered water pump is used to supply water for a village.

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185 words
6.0
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