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The diagram chart below show the Grange park when it first and today .

The diagram chart below show the Grange park when it first and today. 0MAaq
The map chart illustrates the Grange park when it first opened in 1920 and same park today. Overall, In this map show a extremely complex figure. There are consequently many thing is demolished in today like as, rose garden, water feature and children's play area. In the past period, fountain is placed in centre then nowadays it replaced a rose garden and outside the garden given a seats for people. In 1920 the two way to entrance a park on the contrary now entrance is done by underground car park. After that, right side one rose garden is replaced a cafe as well as, pond for water plants is demolished into children's play area. Moreover, In the bottom of Grange park in early period is provide glass house and near the seats on the contrary present time manufacture by water feature. In the opposite side stage for musicians is replaced a amphitheater for concerts. In the top and bottom on past time given two rose garden and a number of seats but today, Is only a one rose garden.
The map chart illustrates the Grange
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when it
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opened in 1920 and same
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park
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today
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a
extremely
complex figure. There are
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many thing
is demolished
in
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today
like as,
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rose
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garden
, water feature and children's play area. In the past period, fountain
is placed
in
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centre
then nowadays it replaced a
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rose
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garden
and outside the
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garden
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given
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a seats
for
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people
. In 1920 the
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two way
to entrance a
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park
on the contrary
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now
entrance
is done
by underground car
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park
. After that, right side one
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rose
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garden
is replaced
a
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cafe
as well
as, pond for water plants
is demolished
into children's play area.
Moreover
, In the bottom of Grange
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park
in early period is
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provide
glass
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house
and near the seats
on the contrary
present time manufacture by water feature. In the opposite side stage for musicians
is replaced
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a
amphitheater for concerts. In the top and bottom on
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past time
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given
two
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rose
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garden
and a number of seats
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but
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today
, Is
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a one
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