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The illustration compares two man-made processes how to manufacture black tea. Overall, this linear diagram divides into two parts, traditional and modern, where every of them has four steps. Firstly, the initial stage of two methods is similar, that is picking leaves from plants and the essential thing is taking only 2 top leaves to have a high quality. Then, they are put on rack and are dried, which calls withering process. Once this has happened, tea can be made by two techniques, loosing tea and tea bags. Former enzymes released from teas, while latter create tiny gradual pieces and this happens faster than previous. Next phase is oxidation for traditional method, where leaves are rolled and spread on tiles, and enzymes with air form leaves with color such as copper. For contemporary method it names fermentation, and leaves plaster to cement. Finally, it is firing or drying, most of wet is moisture out, and product has placemat flavour and aroma. This goes to recur with other leaves.

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, this linear diagram divides into two parts, traditional and modern, where every of them has four steps.

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, the initial stage of two methods is similar, that is
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leaves
 from plants and the essential thing is taking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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leaves
 to have a high quality. Then, they are put
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, which calls withering process. Once this has happened, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 can be made
 by two techniques, loosing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
tea
 bags.

Former enzymes released from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrink
teas
, while latter create tiny gradual pieces and this happens faster than previous. Next
 phase is oxidation for traditional method, where You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedlestalkfrondpetal
leaves
are rolled
 and spread on tiles, and enzymes with air form You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedlestalkfrondpetal
leaves
 with color such as copper. For contemporary method it names fermentation, and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedlestalkfrondpetal
leaves
 plaster to cement. Finally
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 and aroma. This goes to recur with other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedlestalkfrondpetal
leaves
. 