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The bar chart compares percentage of changes in average house costs in five central cities of the world from 1990 to 2002 in comparison with the average costs in 1989.

The bar chart compares percentage of changes in average house costs in five central cities of the world from 1990 to 2002 in comparison with the average costs in 1989. 96wDW
The bar chart compares percentage of changes in average house costs in five central cities of the world from 1990 to 2002 in comparison with the average costs in 1989. Overall, it is clear that the figures are fluctuated over the period shown. The figure for Tokyo showed nearly the same result from 1990 to 2002, whereas the figure for London experienced dramatic change and reached a peak between 1996 and 2002. Looking at the information in more detail, although, average house prices in New York fell to -5% between 1990 and 1995, from 1996 to 2002 it saw significant increase reaching 5%. The figure for Madrid rose by 2% at last 5 years, while this figure fell by 1% in Frankfurt in same period. As can be seen from the chart that the average cost of houses in Tokyo was at -8% in first 5 years, before seeing slight increase in next 6 years. The figure for London decreased and stood at -8% at the beginning of the period before reaching a peak of 12%.
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costs in five central cities of the world

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costs in 1989.

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that the
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for Tokyo
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showed


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nearly
the same result from 1990 to 2002, whereas the
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for London experienced dramatic
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and reached a peak between 1996 and 2002.

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prices in New York fell to -5%

between 1990 and 1995, from 1996 to 2002 it
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significant increase reaching 5%. The
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for


Madrid rose by 2% at last 5 years, while this
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fell by 1% in Frankfurt in same period.

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from the chart that the
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cost of
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in Tokyo was at -8% in
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seeing slight increase in
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for London decreased and stood at -8% at the
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beginning


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reaching a peak of 12%.
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IELTS academic The bar chart compares percentage of changes in average house costs in five central cities of the world from 1990 to 2002 in comparison with the average costs in 1989.

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